Dear Team #905,
Most of your paper is neatly presented along with an easily understandable approach to the problem regarding the normal distribution. In terms of readability, it is strong if given more detailed explanation. However, there could be some improvements:
First, regarding format some of your special characters do not show up. Always make sure to properly convert the file. In the introduction of the model section, you are not supposed to include or place formulas. Instead, formulas and their explanations should come later in the “Clear Explanation of Models” section. Also, most of your sensitivity analysis should actually go in the “Clear Explanation of Models” section. This section will ultimately be your longest and one of your most important. Furthermore, it’s important to always label your assumptions and justifications as this sets up the parameters of your models. Also remember to consistently reference citations within your paper.